If I die; shall no peace come
I am here for life itself
Why try and tear me down?
I'll only get bak up
Shall life hold no source of purity
We all have evil spirits inside
For maybe if I choose
The path right for me ~
I might feel that chance to finally be happy
Go, go, I tell them quietly
The man of evil prophets shows
Tells me I have a choice to make
I learn today, the day will come
When I come to need to want to
Set you free,
Myself as well <3
- Alyssa Frerking
09 - 30 - 2010
First poem I've ever written. Let me know what you think! Maybe I should pursue writing poems? After-all, you can only improve. (:
Oh my gosh!! Such a wonderful poem, for your first time writing a poem! I definitely think you should pursue writing poems! At the moment, creative writing is truly what you're good at... but I believe with practice, you can master the art of writing poems as well. You are a very cryptic person, Alyssa! Please, continue writing! I really do enjoy reading it! :)
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